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The Moment of Divine Silence by ~fuzzynumbskull:iconfuzzynumbskull:





I filled my boots with my sock covered feet
As the sound of crunching leaves echoed my approach
Trudging up the steps heavily and over the lawn,
I gazed up at the cloud filled sky.
Afraid to call myself, my own, me, my enmity,
The shades of blue and gray and pink
I drank down into my memory’s eye.
My mind perturbed by the day’s events,
Waiting in the shade the shadows I met.
We danced together over winter’s fallen leaves
Slept in the earth’s creases as the seasons slowly passed us by.
We ran across the pure ripples of clear pools of water
And bid each other adieu under the evening sky.
As I stepped down my driveway
In my boots filled with my sock covered feet,
I couldn’t help but wonder why I didn’t turn back,
Hesitating at the driveway’s peak,
I rode the wind home and awake from my dream.
©2005-2010 ~fuzzynumbskull
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Author's Comments

this came out of my brain in 10 minutes. inspired by a bad day and a long quiet walk.

-amy

ps. the painting is by monet. its "gondolas in venice"

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:icontoujin:
i love it! its fits the mood very well. i love the use of color and ur use if technique!
:iconfuzzynumbskull:
umm that's a monet.... its "gondolas in venice"

-amy

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If a mime falls in the forest, does anybody care?
:iconfuzzynumbskull:
i'd better fix that...

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If a mime falls in the forest, does anybody care?
:iconsleepy-alligator:
Simply Beautiful. Thats a definate fav.
:iconhalftone:
Very nice poem, I really like the repetition of "my boots with my sock covered feet." For some reason it really just brings things together at the end of the poem. Sorry about the bad day, but long walks during such times can be good. Great work.
:iconfuzzynumbskull:
yeah it does bring it together... usually my socks fill my boots but that day they didn't... just slid around.

-amy

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If a mime falls in the forest, does anybody care?
:iconfallen-princess:
this is a really nice poem, very well written :D the adjectives seem a bit forced in places but its good just the same

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...and if i'm not back in 5 minutes...wait longer!

"We shall bring the beauty of erotic poetry to the masses" :D

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